Pig - reworked

Submitted by Virge on Tue, Jul 22, 2003 - 13:48
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I've reworked the story of Pig. This time with a return to the original ironic ending.
Pig
I also posted it on EK, specifically asking for criticism. I've no idea what that will educe - probably close to nothing. I've been less than loquacious in the EK library for a while now, so it would be a fair cop.