ho hum
Today I am the navel fluff of man -
no pain, no comfort, nothing valued here -
a small blue-greyness nestled in a beer
gut swelled by bitter quaffed from life's chilled can.
Today I am the navel fluff of man -
no pain, no comfort, nothing valued here -
a small blue-greyness nestled in a beer
gut swelled by bitter quaffed from life's chilled can.
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I like that. It made me smile. I thought I'd post my follow-up doggerel here as well as on EK, because I know how much you love those dirty packbawkies (you dirty packbawky sympathizer, you!)
Today, I am confounded and beset
Belaboured from the sighing eaves
With the cries of packbawkies, yet--
And the smell of fallen leaves.
...damn packbawkies.
Oops...put the above comment on the wrong entry. I'm a wanker. You can figure out where it was supposed to go, though.
Yup, I figured. :) Comments moved up by one entry. I need to make it clearer which comment link applies to which entry.
edit: ok, I've added a horizontal bar to separate the entries.